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2084: The Eyes of the Guardians of Sharia are Upon You

It was a bright cold day in April, and the cry of the Muezzin could be heard in the distance, like the roar of a far-off sea. Winston ibn Smith, his chin nuzzled into his keffiyah in an effort to escape the vile wind, slipped quickly through the glass doors of Shahid House, though not quickly enough to prevent a swirl of gritty dust from entering along with him.

The hallway smelt of roasting goat and motor oil. At the end of it a colored poster, too large for indoor display, had been tacked to the wall. It depicted an enormous face, a curled black beard, above it two eyes like suspicious chips of coal beneath a towering turban. Winston headed for the stairs. The regular Ramadan power outages made the lift into an unlikely prospect. With no one to repair them, few lifts worked anymore. Around Ramadan, all of London slowed to a grind of surly tempers, broken machines and recurring blackouts. His flat was six flights up, and Winston had to stop and pause for breath several times along the way. On each landing, opposite the lift-shaft, the poster with the enormous face gazed from the wall. It was one of those pictures which are so contrived that the eyes follow you about when you move. THE EYES OF THE GUARDIANS OF SHARIA ARE UPON YOU, the caption beneath it read.

Inside the flat a sonorously self-righteous voice was reciting Sunnahs about something to do with bathing before morning prayers. The voice came from a decorative inlaid sphere hanging down from the ceiling. Written in curling Arabic script around the circumference of the sphere were the words of the Shahada, that every Muslim was required to say and believe. "La Illah Ilallan, MuḼummarad Rassullan." These were the first words that every resident of London heard on waking. And the last words he heard on falling asleep. Though many of the proles had never learned Arabic, they still knew to bow their heads in submission when they heard them.

The voice switched to dire warnings of hellfire for the faithful who prayed while having urine on their clothes. Winston turned a switch and the voice sank somewhat, though the words were still distinguishable. The instrument (the submitter) could be quieted, but never turned off. He moved over to the window: a small, frail figure, the broad keffiyah hanging around his thin neck like a noose, which was the uniform of the progressive, the liberal, the enlightened members of the party who had brought the terrors of the 20th century and its dreaded curses of colonialism and commercialism to an end, by welcoming in and reconciling the East with the West.

Though the window was tightly shut, the world outside looked cold. Scraps of paper rode the wind down the bleak streets, garrets lined with rags, small gardens smothered in backyards beneath the unseasonable frost. The world was growing colder, but the party insisted that the world was actually growing warmer. Each winter, the submitter would broadcast reports claiming that temperatures were climbing higher and that everyone would have to make sacrifices to bring it down again. Accompanying this were verses from the Koran, which claimed to have foretold this warning in one prophecy or another.

Like most Londoners, Winston knew it was actually growing colder. But he never allowed himself to think about the contradiction. This was the state of mind advocated by Dhimmispeak, the new language being developed under the aegis of the London Sharia Council. The prime tenet of Dhimmispeak was Doublethink through which one could believe two contradictory things at the same time. The Party had developed Doublethink to a high art in the waning days of the country once known as England, when it had advocated promoting tolerance through immigration and staving off economic collapse by expanding spending.

Winston looked off into the distance where the towering pyramid of the London Sharia Council dominated the skyline. From his childhood he remembered that there had been other taller buildings once, but they had been demolished so that no structure might steal away the powerful presence of the council pyramid.

The council pyramid had three sides and each side was dedicated to one of the three ministries that ran the city and the land belonging to the Caliphate beyond it. The Ministry of Tolerance. The Ministry of Truth. The Ministry of Peace. These were their oldspeak names used to communicate with a populace that had still not learned Dhimmispeak. Their proper names were the Jihad of Tolerance. The Jihad of Truth. And the Jihad of Peace. There were other subdivisions elsewhere he knew, such as the Jihad of Agriculture or the Jihad of Energy, but these were less important and therefore did not operate directly under the authority of the London Sharia Council.

Through the hazy skyline, Winston could still see the message burned brightly across the pyramid's face.




Sometimes he read that first line as "There is no truth but a lie, and he has no prophet but murder." It had been a common taunt among resisters in the early days. Before they had been killed off or shipped off to the petroleum fields in the south near the holy city.

Beneath the pyramid of the Sharia Council was darkness, in its shadow ruined buildings slept and starving dogs fed on scraps and corpses amid the rubble. The pyramid had been erected in the days before the Full Reconciliation and it had been bitterly opposed. There had been bombings and shootings. The Party had been obligated to send in its corps to clear the area. Ever since then the pyramid had been growing taller and taller, as the Sharia Council continued to expand. New rooms required that the pyramid be made wider and taller. And with each expansion, the shadow of the Sharia Council spread across London.

Turning away sharply, Winston went to his cupboard. Behind a false front that would fool no one but a casual burglar, he drew out a thin narrow bottle. There was no label on the bottle. The Sharia Council strictly forbade the consumption of alcohol, particularly during Ramadan. But bathtub gin was still widely manufactured and sold. And the Party and the Sharia Council turned a blind eye to it. Some said they even profited from the sales. Others said that the sellers were their men and that they kept a record of everyone who bought from them in order to blackmail them when the time arrived.

Checking to make certain that he was out of range of the Sharia Council's sphere, he swallowed a gulp of the sour liquid, and shuddered as it trickled down his throat. It was alcoholic, but barely anything more than that. But he needed it to prepare him for what he had decided to do.

When his face was clear again, he returned to the living room, and out of range of the sphere, drew out a book from his bag. There was nothing criminal about the book itself. It was a copy of the Koran, and even the proles were expected to own one of those. Unlike the heavily annotated and translated copies owned by the proles, this was untranslated, rendered in the original Arabic. Winston gazed at the scimitar slashes of the heavy black letters, remembering yesterday.

It had been midday in the Department of History in the Ministry of Truth. Winston, along with hundreds of others, had been tasked with rewriting the history of London in Dhimmispeak, beginning with the early introduction of Islam and ending with the Full Reconciliation between the Party and Islam. Like all the others, Winston had trickled out into the hallway when the horn shrieked. Once upon a time it had been a bell, but the Sharia Council had forbidden bells as they were too similar to musical instruments. And music of all kinds was forbidden. Except during the Two Minute Hate.

Winston was just taking his place in one of the middle rows for the beginning of the Two Minute Hate when the dark haired girl whom he knew by sight, but had never spoken to, came unexpectedly into the room. He did not know her name, but he knew that she worked in the Fiction Department. She was a bold-looking girl, covered in black from head to toe, her burqa wound around the waist just tightly enough to bring out the shapeliness of her hips. Winston had disliked her from the very first moment of seeing her. He took his seat.

The screen began with the usual clips courtesy of the Jihad of Peace and the Jihad of Tolerance. The Jihad of Tolerance showed lavish high resolution scenes of justice being meted out to adulteresses, homosexuals and blasphemers. The crowd laughed and cheered as an elderly woman was pelted with stones, her body buried up to her neck in the ground. The audience was informed that she had been a Jewess. A fat man accused of blasphemy struggled with the headman, the sword slicing through his neck and sending his head flying into the dirt. A grinning cleric read verses from the Koran while a young girl had a rope placed around her neck. The narrator informed the audience that she had been raped the night before, so that as a virgin she would not ascend to paradise, but rather the hell that the Prophet Mohammed, Peace Be Upon Him, had declared to be the lot of most women.

Then it was the turn of the Jihad of Peace. Martial sounding music blared, followed by scenes of Ghazis subduing revolts and bombing cities. Piles of Asiatic heads lay in the gutter. Somewhere in the jungle, a tribe of natives was assembled and given a choice between the Koran and a machine gun squad. The announcer in a somber tone that could hardly mask his delight informed viewers that they had chosen the machine guns. More footage showed an ongoing battle against heretics in the desert. Chemical warfare left an entire city filled with the dead. Winston was reminded of Rome. And Moscow.

Suddenly the music was cut off. The next moment a hideous, grinding speech, as of some monstrous machine running without oil, burst from the big screen at the end of the room. It was a noise that set one's teeth on edge and bristled the hair at the back of one's neck. The Hate had started.

As usual, the face of Geert Wilders, the Enemy of the People, had flashed on to the screen. There were hisses here and there among the audience. The programs of the Two Minutes Hate varied from day to day, but there was none in which Wilders was not the principal figure. He was the symbol of intolerance, the emblem of bigotry and hate. All subsequent crimes against the Party and the Sharia Council, all treacheries, acts of sabotage, heresies, deviations, sprang directly out of his teaching. Somewhere or other he was still alive and hatching his conspiracies: perhaps somewhere beyond the sea, under the protection of his foreign paymasters, perhaps even -- so it was occasionally rumored -- in some hiding-place in London itself.

Winston's diaphragm was constricted. He could never see the face of Wilders without a painful mixture of emotions. There was something unreconstructedly European about him. Something perversely and unashamedly reactionary. Wilders was delivering his usual venomous attack upon the Caliphate, -- an attack so exaggerated and perverse that a child should have been able to see through it, and yet just plausible enough to fill one with an alarmed feeling that other people, less level-headed than oneself, might be taken in by it. He was abusing the Sharia Council, he was denouncing the dictatorship of the Party, he was advocating democracy, equality, zionism, freedom of speech, freedom of the Press, freedom of assembly and freedom of thought. And all the while, and the while behind him there marched endless columns of solid-looking men with expressionless Asiatic faces.

In its second minute the Hate rose to a frenzy. People were leaping up and down in their places and shouting at the tops of their voices in an effort to drown the maddening bleating voice that came from the screen. In a lucid moment Winston found that he was shouting with the others and kicking his heel violently against the rung of his chair. The horrible thing about the Two Minutes Hate was not that one was obliged to act a part, but, on the contrary, that it was impossible to avoid joining in. Within thirty seconds any pretense was always unnecessary. A hideous ecstasy of fear and vindictiveness, a desire to kill, to torture, to smash faces in with a sledge-hammer, seemed to flow through the whole group of people like an electric current, turning one even against one's will into a grimacing, screaming lunatic. And yet the rage that one felt was an abstract, undirected emotion which could be switched from one object to another like the flame of a blowlamp.

Thus, at one moment Winston's hatred was not turned against Wilders at all, but, on the contrary, against the Sharia Council and the Party and its ministries and jihads. Against the constant control and surveillance. The endless tyranny and oppression. And most of all against his own helplessness in the face of it all. It had been one moment, but a pivotal one.

And now sitting with the Koran open in his lap, that he had covertly picked up second-hand, Winston found himself writing on its pages, DOWN WITH ISLAM, DOWN WITH ISLAM, DOWN WITH ISLAM. Not in the curling Arabic script and the Dhimmispeak grammar, but in old English. He went on writing until he had filled page after page that way.

For a moment he was seized by a kind of hysteria. He began writing in a hurried untidy scrawl:

theyll shoot me i don't care theyll shoot me in the back of the neck i dont care down with islam they always shoot you in the back of the neck i dont care down with islam --

He sat back in his chair, slightly ashamed of himself, and laid down the pen. Then taking a lighter from his coat pocket, he held it up to the Koran, and watched the pages burn, destroying both the evidence of his crime and the original crime that had been perpetrated against mankind. Against billions dead, tortured, brutalized, raped, terrorized into silence, obedience and compliance.

The next moment he started violently. There was a knocking at the door...

(Postscript: Six men were arrested in England last month for burning the Koran last month)


  1. Yeah, that's about the size of it.

    Excellent as usual.

  2. Anonymous7/10/10

    Brilliant. Orwell would be proud of you.

  3. crystal k.7/10/10

    Franz Kafka

  4. Anonymous7/10/10

    I'm surprised no one has written 2084, a sequel to 1984 in which Ingslam has replaced Ingsoc.

  5. nobody's favorite7/10/10

    This version of 1984 gave me the chills, it was so well done and so realistic. It is terrifying.

  6. Shane7/10/10

    This future vision of the UK will come to pass, its in the making as i type. Its so sad but 50 years of political correctness, ethnic diversity, multiculturalism, socialism, nihillism and corporate greed as all but destroyed the ability of people to see whats in front of their eyes. Its a case of see no evil, hear no evil.

  7. Can I have your permission to translate this into Dutch? This will go down very well in the Netherlands. Of course, you will be listed as the original author and a link and recommendation to your site as well.

  8. Brilliant work.

  9. Thank you all,

    Herman, yes you do, but keep in mind it's an adaptation of 1984 by George Orwell.

  10. Daniel,
    Thnak you for permission to translate.
    Of course, I knew it is an Orwell adaptation. That is what makes it so brilliant.

  11. Superb adaptation of Orwell's masterpiece, urgently relevant.

  12. dahozho8/10/10

    Another post hit out of the park. Sultan, your writing is always on-point and illuminating. This could certainly be turned into a full-length new warning against dictatorships in any form, but just thinking about immersing in that sort of filth for that length of time is giving me migraine.

    No submission, no surrender.

  13. Daniel, there is a novel, The Mosque of Notre Dame de Paris, 2048 , by Yelena (or Elena) Chudinova, which parallels your Orwell adaptation. This novel envisions life in a dystopian Islamized France in the middle of the twenty first century. Excerpts from the novel, translated into English, can be found at jihadwatch.org. The book itself is not yet available in English; it has reportedly sold well in its original Russian, and, I believe, has just been translated into French.

  14. Anonymous8/10/10

    The only thing that doesn't make the parallel quite work (imo) is the somewhat...questionable relationship between Islam and technology. Saudi Arabia is given all these advanced planes by America and still can't figure out how to use them.

    What makes an all-encompassing totalitarianism work in "1984" is the use of technology (like viewscreens) and others described here. Which I can't see lasting too long in an Islamic dictatorship.

    Perhaps this is missing the forest for the trees but it is what I thought of.

  15. Gedalia9/10/10

    This is doubleplusgood.

    Best blog I have read all year.

  16. Richard, interesting

    Anonymous, the tyranny in 1984 doesn't depend on technology, so much as on the pervasive sense of paranoia that it creates. BTW the Saudis use the technology they have to keep track of women.

    Gedalia, I prefer to think of it as crimethink

  17. This is brilliant and terrifying.

  18. Everyone who has taken a strong stand against the Islamization of any modern western nation has been libeled, vilified, and demonized.

    You are correct that Geert Wilders is the current "poster boy" for the lefty/jihadi "five-minute hate" - but he was not the first.

    This person paid with his life twenty years ago.

  19. It really galls me when liberals accuse people of Islamophobia for speaking out against Islamic terrorism and oppression yet utterly ignore when we speak out against legit attacks and discrimination against Muslims/Arabs.

    Example--about three years ago an 18-year old boy was shot to death at a party hosted by a 15-year old girl's mother. Lots of underage kids in the house--suburban house--lots of booze, too. Long story short: the Muslim boy, son of Iranian immigrants, was shot to death.

    The DA did nothing to help the family, other than telling them to go home and mourn their son. People in my community protested, the Iranian immigrant community protested, too, through the media.

    It was a case of the DA protecting the suburbanite woman instead of seeking justice for a young immigrant kid who was shot to death.

    The community fought this injustice.

    But liberals would ignore this. They'd rather just stamp a scarlet I on our foreheads for being against terrorism.

    That's very galling. We fight for the rights of Muslims truly wronged but we're Islamophobinc. Crazy.

  20. Anonymous16/10/10

    And more evidence that 2084 is upon us

    The Ministry of Cowardice

    The Scotsman has a piece about women who are "hidden victims" of forced marriage. But out of fear of legal trouble or perhaps violence, the paper won't even mention the M word. It describes them only as part of the "ethnic minority community." A community that forces its daughters into a life with someone they didn't choose.


  21. Edward Cline: I have only one quibble with this imaginative make-over of “1984,” and that concerns the girl. She was “the dark haired girl whom he knew by sight…. She was a bold-looking girl, covered in black from head to toe, her burqa wound around the waist just tightly enough to bring out the shapeliness of her hips.” How could he know her “by sight,” that she was “bold looking,” and that she was “dark haired,” if a burqa covered her from “head to toe”? And, I’ve never seen a woman in a burqa that brought out the shapeliness of any part of her anatomy. Burqas are intended to turn women into sexless, indistinguishable ciphers. Smith wouldn’t have been able to pick her out from any group of similarly sheathed women.


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